Add fun

Also add grammar writing fixes... again

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/.md/thoughts/syntax/my-worst-habit.md b/.md/thoughts/syntax/my-worst-habit.md
index ab89ddf..b861396 100644
--- a/.md/thoughts/syntax/my-worst-habit.md
+++ b/.md/thoughts/syntax/my-worst-habit.md
@@ -6,11 +6,13 @@ the mind tends to pay less attention to what's inside (or at least my
 mind does). I also believe it represents some repressed psychological
 trauma, since a Professor once circled how many times I abused the
 double dash, "--", and I haven't quite felt comfortable using it
-since--unless it feels right.
+since--unless it feels right. As a result, I've found a new punctuation
+mark to abuse.
 
-The punctuation works in that last example, but relying on it leads to
-bad habits, and usually, sentences that droll on for far longer than
-welcome. Consider the following example from Naked Lunch:
+The parentheses and double dash work all right in that last paragraph,
+but relying on it leads to bad habits, and usually, sentences that
+droll on for far longer than welcome. Consider the following example
+from Naked Lunch:
 
 ```
 Doc Browbeck was party inna second part. A retired abortionist and junk